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| Ai.Therapy 2007-12-15 ch 16,   | Mm creative! I've actually never read this plot before, and it seems pretty realistic to me. I like Ashe, and Katze... Matt kinda gets on my nerves with his whining but, If I was in his Converses, I'd problly be acting the same way. He needs to make up his mind though whether he likes Katze, loves him, or not. And Katze, I can relate. It seems like he is doing his best to make Matt happy. And Gavin is nice to the holy extent, not even to mad about finding them together. I like how Matt narcoleptic. That means, sleeps randomly, right? I actually am narcoleptic. =.= I'm feeling very sleepy right now actually... I'd have to say, you organize the chapters and story and everything pretty good... The time goes along fast and I was wondering, how has he not died from all those cuts? How come he was wearing a short sleeved shirt, but no one mentions the cuts all on his arms? How come when he moves his arms, they don't hurt, or open, or bleed? What happend with the blood all over the school, what was that about? And... I like the german :3 I like how Matt denies he's gay, and it's pretty realistic and I can actually relate since im a blubbering shy person, that he says "molest" instead of... well kiss, or any sort of phys. contact. XD It makes it easier to say. And, ... For Matt to sleep around, awesome. XD Pretty nice twist, I think, especially since he calls out Katze's name. And Ashe just rocks with that situation. I wonder if Matt really IS good in bed? He must be for so many people to like him. Thats slightly disturbing she raped him though.. Imeanprettydisturbing.. The cocept of it is gross. XD But good job! I'm kinda iffy on whether its great or better than great XD But I wanna read more! And, good job throwing in the male/male content. You didn't throw it in actually, just kinda made it coinidental. :D |
| DRAGONFIRE04 2007-12-15 ch 16, | PLEASE UPDATE SOON. I like to see what happen next. |
| Uke-Mochi 2007-08-29 ch 1, | THEY WERE DOING GAY THINGS! IN MATT'S BACKYARD!! XD I was laughing so hard... beautiful first chapter. Katze rocks my socks, like, uber. ~Uke_Mochi |
| DRAGONFIRE04 2007-06-10 ch 8, | UPDATE SOON PLEASE. I like this story. I wonder if matt and Katze will act on their feeling. |