This was really sweet, even if the person isn't real. Sorry I havn't reviewed your stuff, I have been away and couldn't get to a computer. Better late than never though! Great job!

[Oh, and I think fictionpress decided to work now. Thank God.]

Aww cute! I think we all need someone to help us sometimes, no matter how much we want to do it on our own.

This is really nice.

It reads like the chorus to a song. Which is a good thing... it has a nice rhythm and flow.

I like the message.

The last line isn't as strong as the others but all in all it is good.