Wow, really good. Love is a hard thing. I can relate to this. Though I still can't find love a game. At least real love isn't. Great job, and God bless.

I think you meant "I'm suffocating" instead of "I suffocating".

But I don't really care much about typos anyway.

Love can work out sometimes, right? I wouldn't know, but I believe it can. Good work.

i like it, especially the opening two lines.