This was really...emotional. Great repitition. I could feel a lot of pain, and at the same time detachment. It is a really sad poem, and friendship can be so hard. Especially when you've done something you regret, that you can never take back or make right. Great job on this poem. I hope everything works out.

great. i love some of the lines in it great job

"Sorry you read my should-have-been private thoughts"

I love that line.

Great job. (How many times have I said that? I must find something better to say in reviews, something more interesting than "good work, good job, yada yada yada. *sigh*)

But good work.