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| flies.like.decay. 2007-10-24 ch 1,   | It seems like we're all afraid to be ourselves because we don't know if we could accept the person that we really are inside. Good job! |
| half-sketched.staccatos 2007-10-03 ch 1, | konnichi wa "maybe I'm just afraid that you would not like / the me that's marked '©Original'" -- fav line. So sorry this is such a short, evil review; but I'm in a huge rush at the moment. :P I'll be looking out for more of your work. Zaijen -Shan- |
| simpleplan13 2007-05-24 ch 1, | I love the idea of being a carbon copy and the copywrited original at the end is amazing... its a beautful and relateable piece |
| A Creature of Literature 2007-04-09 ch 1, | I also find this one very intriguing. It's wonderful how you let your readers draw their own conclusions about what your poetry is meant to convey. |
| in a jar pk 2007-04-04 ch 1, | i loved this. i can't say anything besides that lol. i did read 'snowflakes' and i loved that piece too!! chromosomes just seemed to fit though for me...i dunno lol. but i am a big fan of your work!! x |
| smile for the sunshine 2007-04-01 ch 1, | I like this. It's really interesting. I like the different point of view. You did well on this. Keep up the great work. |
| FoxStorm 2007-04-01 ch 1, | I like it. It reminds me of one of my friends... |