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| CatarinaP 2007-09-06 ch 1, | Oh verry interesting! & You started this in April! Will you continue writing this story? |
| naufdude 2007-05-12 ch 1, | FINALLY A GOOD STORY! i loved it it's been a long time since i read a good story like yours! thank you so much... it's well written and please update! |
| flojo22811 2007-05-09 ch 1, | that was extremely confusing - i couldn't keep track at all. i did like it though... but you could develop it and really improve it. this would be fantastic as a longer story. |
| springfiry 2007-04-04 ch 1, | Very good start! Don't just leave it like that11 |
| dblack50 2007-04-03 ch 1, | WOW! You're really going to leave that as a one shot? I love the tension between them and would love to hear more, although it does stand well on its own. Fabulous story, but then, I love everything I've read of yours. You create very real characters and I can feel the emotion between them when I read the story. Keep it up! |