Reviews for scene off the bridge

Reviews For: scene off the bridge

relapse into change 2007-10-04 ch 1,	just..amazing
as if it's not obvious 2007-08-30 ch 1,	i'm definitely not ignoring this or the end of '24.' i've read it all so many times i could probably recite it by now. i just haven't found the right words yet. please don't be angry that i'm reviewing. i'm assuming that you blocked me to force me to think before i wrote something completely incoherent that had nothing to do with the poem. i will review this and 24 ... once i figure out what the hell i'm going to say. but it probably still won't make sense. but i'll try.
bread and circuses 2007-07-19 ch 1,	i keep coming back to this. it's the most resonant thing i've ever read.
wordsworth in a garbage can 2007-07-13 ch 1,	the last part just flattened me. well done.
ShadesofBlue69 2007-04-30 ch 1,	heh, this is a sweet farewell piece. I really like how you can read it two ways, with the parentheses or without, that's really cool. but, I don't really like the lines about trust...they don't seem to fit or to be as well designed as your other lines.
none of burt's beeswax 2007-04-23 ch 1,	wow, this seems so much like a song...i actually found myself thinking in chords when i was reading it. it's really a fantastic piece; i love the repetition--i loved that "i know who you are/(if ou) know why you are/i know who you are/(then i don't) know why you are."
angel1357 2007-04-07 ch 1,	I read that about five times. And it makes complete sense. And what exactly do you mean by your final piece? :confused: I love your work, keep writing!
contrast and friction 2007-04-07 ch 1,	It's unbelievable that we've reached an ending of sorts. This is the FINAL piece on this account. You will receive these reviews.. and you'll move on to something bigger & better. I agree with your note - everyone has changed and grown on here. Everything we write becomes a part of us.. and in the end, i don't think it really matters that we say goodbye to fiction press - it doesn't change us, it doesn't change what we've become during our time on this site. We're still what we've written. This piece IS an ending. It's everything and more anyone could have asked for in your final piece. I think it wraps everything up nicely. It doesn't necessarily give us direction or indicate where you're going to go from here - maybe there can never really be any definitive closure to everything that has happened. But you can still gain something from it, learn from your mistakes and move onto the next chapter of your life, taking with you the things you have learnt along the way. I think that's what you've proven with this - I've followed you through this account and i've watched you change and grow stronger from everything that you have encountered.. I can actually say with complete honesty that I'm extremely proud of you - not only as a writer, but as a person. I only know you through fictionpress but your writing influences me and you inspire me. Thank you for giving us such a beautiful farewell. I don't want to think of this as the end - because, really, it isn't. You're simply moving on .. a new chapter, a new part of your life. & for that, I wish you the very best. xox
recycle rhymes 2007-04-03 ch 1,	that was so confusing. haha it could be that i woke up at 4:30 but other than that i think there is good repetition just kind of confuses me more. haha :) and omg you're not posting anymore. i have enjoyed your writing and talking with you. you're honestly at my top of the fp writers that i idolize :)
she's so hardcore 2007-04-01 ch 1,	Wow. ~j. lynn
Guardrail 2007-04-01 ch 1,	I really love this piece. The imagry and metaphors are stunningly beautiful and powerful. Great message too. It's too bad that this is your last piece here. I wish I could have found your writing sooner. Good luck to you.

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