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| glimpses from an ivory towe... 2007-06-12 ch 1,  | abuseBrilliant, especially for blackout poetry. "Global minutes spilling over squeeze an Hour enough to accomodate the network." Really liked those lines, but I'm at a loss to explain why. Overall, excellent imagery. Julia |
| Torn Silver Moon 2007-04-06 ch 1, | abusePff, never mind the other idiot who reviewd this, it's a brilliant black out poem. It's extremley well written and the words you chose were perfect. I'm sure Mr. Wall will like it ;D. |
| Taltush/MeiMei 2007-04-01 ch 1, | abuseSo this is a type of poetry? Interesting... While I suppose it must be quite fun, the quality of the writing's not much. It's a little TOO vague, a little TOO confusing, and completely emotionless (because, after all, it has no personality or humanity to it!). While I'm sure it must have been difficult to do, I got the impression that you "cheated", because you didn't pick words, or work on a flow. An interesting type of poetry, certainly, and if you pick as well as you write, I'm sure the rest of your works are good. This one, however, is not. It seems more as a result of the style... |