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| SamanthaNicole 2007-10-31 ch 1,   | Hmm. I really enjoyed this. By repeating the same line you really bring forth an emotion, and the poem seems to grow more and more urgent as it goes along. Not to mention it's very relateable. I'm sure everyone's felt this way at some point in their life, and you do a wonderful job of expressing the frustration a person feels. Good for you. This was lovely. Cheers, Sammy |