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| x3life 2008-01-29 ch 1, | aww this was so cute =) |
| RoseLife 2007-08-13 ch 1, | NAW! so cute! the were brought together by the powerful forces of the earth.. in a closet! so adorable! great job. loved it to bitz! keep it up! =P ~RL~ |
| hija de jesucristo 2007-07-12 ch 1, | oh m god. i lovethe ending. it's beautiful-the whole story, that is. so what happens next? |
| Kimberli Kitten 2007-06-21 ch 1, | That was really creative. I liked it! |
| jazz 2007-04-28 ch 1, | oh-my-god. that was ADORABLE! omg like, PERFECT, ROMANTIC, CUTE LOVE SCENE. wow that like made me smile, so much! i love the title, and the characters names. you always pick good ones. and it's a good story of how two people in totally different worlds can come together and be so perfect for each other! like, the title come down to me fits because he's like a popular, hot jock, and she's not, but they would never have known each other and been so adorable, BUT BY FATE THEY GOT STUCK IN A CLOSET! awesome story. |
| Mysterywriter200 2007-04-02 ch 1, | good story |
| woodstock1969 2007-04-01 ch 1, | I loved this story! It was not only adorable, but it also sent a powerful message about how you can think you know someone, but then they surprise you. Great job! |
| maggie 2007-04-01 ch 1, | “I have a dog.” “Typical.” “What?” “It’s typical for guys like you to have dogs.” “Guys like me?” “Jocks.” “Ooh, so that’s how you see me?” “I guess, I think that you’re different from the other jocks, but I just knew that you were going to have a dog. You weren’t going to have a ferret like Tucker because Tucker’s kind of strange and he’s not a jock. All jocks have dogs.” I confirm. He looks slightly appalled. “Not all jocks, I have this friend, you know Mike Kennedy?” I nod. “Well he has a fish and he has no dog, he’s on the football team also and he has a fish! So ha! It proves your statement wrong!” “Okay, okay fine most jocks have dogs.” “That doesn’t make it any better.” “Well uh, that’s too bad for you.” “You don’t have a dog.” “So? What does that have to do with anything Wes? I’m not a jock, so that doesn’t even apply to my statement.” “I know I was just making an observation.” “Ooh, well aren’t we special?” He rolls his eyes. “Uh-huh, I am very special. Thank you very much.” “Don’t flatter yourself too much.” [hahahha! i loved that part. it was cute. i liked the end where they got together. loved it!] |