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| Jenc11 2008-06-16 ch 33,   | It was very interesting reading the events in Daevon's point of view. Thank you for the great read. =) |
| EdwardDazzlesMe 2007-11-19 ch 33, | Great story! I'm glad I took the time to read it. :) It was well written and believable. God has blessed you with a great talent, and it should be shared with the world! :) Keep it up! EdwardDazzlesMe |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-10-04 ch 33, | Aw, totally amazing story. It was really unique and jsut fun to read. Great job. :) |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-10-04 ch 15, | AH i totally knew it! LMAO. I love the suspense and mystery in this chapter. Totally awesome! :D |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-10-04 ch 10, | I thought someone was after Parker or something. Aw, I can't believe he's dead! |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-10-03 ch 7, | Aw how cheesy. :P |
| Gentle. Edge. 2007-10-03 ch 1, | Interesting first chapter. it's kidna boring though, but it's very well-written. |
| Carmel March 2007-09-07 ch 33, | That was an excellent way to end the story. It wrapped things up, but it also left a bit to the reader's imagination, and that's perfect. I just want to say thank you for writing this, and I hope to see more from you in the future :) ~Carm~ |
| SuperCUTEJensen 2007-09-04 ch 33, | I've just read your whole story I love it... I'm glad they are back together cant wait for the sequeal and cant wait to read more! |
| Michelle Richard 2007-09-04 ch 33, | Excellent story. I'm glad that they were able to be together in the end. Can't wait for the sequel. |
| Carmel March 2007-09-01 ch 32, | I'm so sorry for not reviewing sooner! Saying I was busy would be an understatement. But now that I've had the chance to read this, I just want to tell you that this was amazing and, once again, I loved it. Hope to read more soon :) ~Carm~ |
| Michelle Richard 2007-08-29 ch 32, | Daevon is one of the most understanding guys. I don't know to many that would follow a girl after she had just left without so much as a word. I'm excited that he did follow her and I can't wait to see what the next chapter brings. Hopefully everything works out for the best. As always, good job! |
| Michelle Richard 2007-08-28 ch 31, | Poor Monika. I hope that Daeven comes after her. I really like this story. I especially like Reina's character. Can't wait to read the rest of it. Good job. |
| REader 2007-08-27 ch 31, | i LOVE the "if you love me you'll come after me" ploy! and i like your story -- REader |
| elle 2007-08-26 ch 31, | I adore this story! o Daevon... i really do hope it is a misunderstanding! please update soon! |