Reviews for Pray, To Not Let Me Down

Isca 2008-09-27 ch 1,	"You pray, Don't let me down." I loved that ending! It was a perfect way to express the relationship between hope and faith :)
RodeoGirl 2008-09-03 ch 1,	I really liked this. Especially this stanza... Hands clasped together, you hope… With every thread of your being That everything will be all right That not all you live for… Is a lost cause But I did not understand this stanza... Are you talking about what you gave up for faith? So many things lost, forgotten And so many promises broken They were all empty All lies and no truths I loved this piece, great job!
little smiles 2007-04-06 ch 1,	I love your style :) Especially the line "hope in faith and faith in hope", that was partly what drew me in from the summary; beautiful. There's a lot of feeling here, I love the idea of doubt as a black hole, and the home of hope at the same time... that you can't have one without the other. It's lovely, I wish I could write poetry!