|Reviews for Innocence|
| Vanilla Tea 2/16/08 . chapter 1
This is so sad because it's something that happens to a lot of people. good topic for a poem, i can't really find anything to critisize, the rhyming was does very well. Good job!
Oh and i think you may have chosen K accidentally, but it should be rated T.
| Kazuki Mishima 6/30/07 . chapter 1
This is true. I haven't personally experienced the extremes described here, but this poem eloquently reminded me that I do sometimes pine for my lost innocence.
| R-Reynard 4/1/07 . chapter 1
wow this is incredibaly good, i relate so much to it haha...keep up the good work