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| little smiles 2007-04-08 ch 1,   | Wow, this is a very powerful poem. Your word choice and imagery are really intense, and I think the repetition emphasised it perfectly. After reading it I was left with a feeling of desperation, and it lingered in my mind. I may have said this before, but you really do have a great style. Oh, and thank you for your review on my story! I loved your reaction, really made me smile :) |