its great, seriously, you are really good. keep up the updates please. :)

Interesting... I'd love to see where this is going... definitely keeping an eye on this! The love triangle looks like it could prove to be amusing, your characters and world setting seem fairly original... I love the potential. This could be the beginning of a very good story... or an auspicious start to an incredible flop. I'm hoping for the former.
Erisah