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| Amaranthine 2007-04-30 ch 2, anon. | abuseBest written: All in the Family-Dark Most creative: Chilling Winds-Musashi Best overall: This was a hard decision, but in the end, I chose 'Soulless Reunion' by henred5. *my first review, and taking place around finals time. My others will be much lengthy-er, I assure you. |
| Myriadragon 2007-04-30 ch 1,  | abuseHmm... M--PandaKnight O--Henred5 B--Meilan Firaga |
| Myriadragon 2007-04-30 ch 11, | abuseIt's just...clumsy. The sentence structures, paragraph structures, scene structures...it's clumsy. |
| Myriadragon 2007-04-30 ch 9, | abuseYagh! What is it with y'all and the creep factor this month?? |
| Myriadragon 2007-04-30 ch 8, | abuseEm...okay... |
| Myriadragon 2007-04-30 ch 6, | abuseEm...I think you had a point here, but I kinda missed it. Try to find a better way to communicate it. |
| Myriadragon 2007-04-30 ch 5, | abuseI find myself highly amused by his view of sex :) |
| Myriadragon 2007-04-30 ch 4, | abuseHm...could be interesting. A few punctuation mistakes, and I have minor issues with you word choice, especially at the beginning (it reads about as well as Tolkien...when it comes to big or unusual words, use sparingly. Especially at the beginning, or you're likely to lose your audience before you've even begun). |
| Myriadragon 2007-04-30 ch 3, | abuseYah! Creepycreepycreepy! But very good. |
| Myriadragon 2007-04-30 ch 2, | abuse-sigh- the continuing vampire drama...not a whole lot to say, really. |
| Chiomi 2007-04-29 ch 1, | abuseOriginality: Pandaknight Mechanics: Henred Best: Meilan Firaga |
| henred5 2007-04-28 ch 1, | abuse-Mechanics: Arachne by Meilan Firaga -Originality: Chilling Winds by Musashi -Best: I'm broke, you're broke, let's leave it at that by Jadalycya Well there are my votes, nice batch of stories this month. *nods head* ~henred5~ |
| henred5 2007-04-28 ch 11, | abusePretty strange...had to read it a few times to get the jist. I think the plot line is pretty good, maybe needs working on but other then that brilliant. |
| henred5 2007-04-28 ch 10, | abuseThank the writer for adding another part to the short story. Loved it, a bit strange and twisted plot line, but it makes it better. :XD |
| henred5 2007-04-28 ch 9, | abuseo_0 *blushes* |