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JustCallMeGiggles 2007-06-14 ch 3,	Oh my goodness, this is such a fun story! I really like it. Off to a good start!
Sea-Chell 2007-06-14 ch 3,	James' scarier. :3
Alix.Natalie 2007-06-13 ch 3,	Ohh...This is so interesting. Yes, I like the characters. ALL of them, but it's hard to empatize with sam since we still don't know him that well. Please post the next chapter soon!
psycho-vampire-princess 2007-06-13 ch 3,	It rocks! It rules! Please update more, I don't mean to sound like an **-hole. I know the whole update more thing can and does get annoying. You have really good wording. Ur reviewer, psychotic-vampire-princess
itsmyMO 2007-04-05 ch 2,	Stick with this title. I like it. Its short and to the point without giving too much away. Its also vague enough that it won't be too restricting when you really get into the story.
A Scarred Soul 2007-04-04 ch 2,	Hahahaha, that's pretty funny! The whole gun part I mean. Anyway, why can't they be guys with naked male statues all over, they could be gay! hehe Anyway (again), this was really funny, so I can't wait for more!
CorpZ 2007-04-04 ch 2,	god chapter cant wait for next
zephyr deity 2007-04-04 ch 2,	WHAT THE MUFFIN? I don't understand the sons part and then the naked men statues part. I think it'd be better if the "you think: this is a good house" became "YOU'D think..." Wow, I am definitely liking the house. Lol, I'm liking all the brothers so far and Cam seems like a nice guy but what the hell is up with that gun? lol.
A Scarred Soul 2007-04-02 ch 1,	This is a very interesting story so far. It's very well written, I can tell already you're a great writer, and there are very few mistakes. The plot is prety cool, especially the guyphobia part. Sounds kinda like me actually. lol I can't wait to read some more!
zephyr deity 2007-04-02 ch 1,	"I grinned that charming grin my father teases me about, claiming that it's the most repulsive thing he's seen since my mother's cooking." - I love that part. I really like the story, it's not like other FP stories that are short yet unsatisfactory. There's a lot of details and it seems like you've made this Kiera character really interesting - I love the name too, I have a certain interest in weird names (you should see my fics). You said you wanted some suggestions for titles and I suggest, "Boys Are An Awfully Big Adventure" - based on the Peter Pan quoting or "A Mansion Isn't Big Enough For Me & Five Boys." The last one was long but I like it better.

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