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Reviews For: Child of Night

Stephanie Ridings
2007-07-08
ch 4,
Ooh! I'm reviewing...
Again!
Yes, I am mentally exerting myself. Feel proud of your ex-fiance and present-sister.
That's me. Sad, isn't it?
Yes, it is.
Now you have to review 'All They've Got'. It's on FanFiction, but I'm sure you can manage.
Sheya!
insane in the brain
2007-05-01
ch 3,
Oh, I like this... :)

PLEASE keep writing it?
Stephanie Ridings
2007-04-10
ch 3,
That's good.
That's really, really good.
But I've already told you that, so I will leave you now.
But I like your charactors. They're all so... complicated.
Nice.
Doc Xenith
2007-04-02
ch 1,
The story is off to a good start, I really enjoyed reading it. I like the characters you've established and it seems like you're well on your way to developing theem nicely and making the story more enjoyable.

The only problems I had were I felt that the settings could have used a bit more description, as could the characters when first introduced. You could probably benefit from letting small pieces of infromation about characters appearance, age, ect slip in at different parts of the story.

Good luck and keep writing :)
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