lol ok then Can't wait for the update

Your story has a good start. I think you should add some discription. It would make the story better. I think it is good so far.

oh my god... what a retarded little bitch whore!

umkay, if you steal your best friend's boyfriend, you have no right to ever be the one to make the first approach for conversation. You are to duck your head and hide on the outskirts of society in proper shame until she deigns to speak to you and/or offer forgiveness, which you undoubtedly do NOT deserve.

I like it so far! You absolutely must tell what they look like. Anyways, update soon!

BookWorm202

lol she rejected him. He deserved it. What I would just suggest is to make the chapters longer :) I know it's hard..I tried...

i like your story and it would be nice if could describe the characters!

What a smug guy...feel like slapping him. I'm a hardcore feminist! Just kidding. Update soon please?

Wow, this was cute and it brought a smile to my face. The end got a bit hard to desifer but that could just be on me and my fast reading. It's pretty odd that Tyler asks her for her number, especially right after she is obviously angry with him. But this seems cute, realistic and romantic. We'll see what happens. : )

cute

tell him to "Figure it out"

that'll make him happy

hehe

The story definitely has potential. I look forward to seeing you build the chemistry between the two main characters.

lol I like your story. It's funny and realistic. I can't wait to see what happens to Allie and Tyler! :)

good start