true and relatable by a lot of people. makes me think of peer pressure for some reason. great job!

~mez~

lol, this reminds me a little of thoughts i've had, which are probably not anything to do with the reason you wrote this short poem. i've always thought that my parents tell me to have a good career for stability and contentment, and i've often imagined a time when i may not have that career, or a completely seperate world of imagination. lol, just random rambling thoughts. like this though ;)

~mez~

wow, these are a good idea. it'll be interesting to read them. i like this one. it can actually apply to loads of people and to various relationships.

~mez~

even though this is less lines, it has the impact. I love it. and i wish there were more short ones like this, to show these tidbits of a life. or a day in the life.
=/ whichever.