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Faithless Juliet
2007-04-03
ch 1,
The loss that you present in this poem is great, but it's not overpowing on the page, which I think makes it more relatatble and enjoyable to the reader. A very honest and heartfelt poem, I really enjoyed the read, keep up the good work.

Much love,
Juliet.
xDancingintheRainx
2007-04-02
ch 1,
Wow. This is a deep and beautiful piece! The ending leaves the reader feeling what you're feeling and seeing what you're seeing. The imagery was clear all the way through and I think you did an excellent job! Keep up the great work!
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