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| Faithless Juliet 2007-04-03 ch 1, | The loss that you present in this poem is great, but it's not overpowing on the page, which I think makes it more relatatble and enjoyable to the reader. A very honest and heartfelt poem, I really enjoyed the read, keep up the good work. Much love, Juliet. |
| xDancingintheRainx 2007-04-02 ch 1, | Wow. This is a deep and beautiful piece! The ending leaves the reader feeling what you're feeling and seeing what you're seeing. The imagery was clear all the way through and I think you did an excellent job! Keep up the great work! |