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| Ivory Taint 2008-07-12 ch 1,   | Very good and unique. Keep writing. :) |
| Tender Sugar 2008-05-24 ch 1, | I adore this cinquain. A pencil is such a simple object, but the words you choose and the ending verb makes me want to remember never to take the ability to write for granted ever again ;]. Great job! |
| a silenced revolution 2008-01-06 ch 1, | Accurate description, and again I think the last line is perfect. Nice. |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-03 ch 1, | I like the poem although I use pen. ;) ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Masked Soul 2007-09-17 ch 1, | "Shortens with use" I know that all to well I started off with a new pencil one day and by the time I had finished writing well the pencil finished too lol that's why i prefer writing in pencil you see your progress not only on the turning pages but also in the shrinking pencil nice job it's on the favs list |
| Definition 2007-09-01 ch 1, | Aww, I love the idea. I find it pleasant and strangely cute ^^ |
| SirScott 2007-08-11 ch 1, | I have always prefered ink pens to pencils, unless it's working with wood or building something. It's sad when a pencil runs out and has to be tossed. Let's just hope we made good use of it before its life comes to an end. ~SirScott |
| burning in effigy 2007-08-03 ch 1, | cute :) now i have the urge to write all my poems by hand lol (sorry for the late review- i was on a bit of a hiatus) "Ready to write, eager to please" made me giggle :] |
| Ramenluver 2007-07-13 ch 1, | Most of my pencils are chewed on. ^_^' Nice though. Like when it said "eager to please." -Ramen |
| SpeedingCars8 2007-07-12 ch 1, | i love that you took a lifeless object and gave it personality. great writing! |
| Lady Gardenia 2007-07-06 ch 1, | This is so oddly cute. It made me giggle. :3 |
| Chidori Nadare 2007-07-03 ch 1, | Pencil is an artist's and a writer's best friends. This really inspired me to write something. God job! -C.N |
| Methuselah Renard 2007-06-17 ch 1, | Ah, the pencil, a sketcher and writer's best friend. The cinquain nicely sums it up. |
| Sercus Kaynine 2007-06-04 ch 1, | And now I feel like writing something. Well, why not? (pauses and waits for idea) ... -_- I'll think of something. I like the idea behind this, the fact that it inspires you, and the way it is short, sweet, and to the point. Nice work! |
| Falcon0Rider 2007-05-14 ch 1, | Ah, a writer's best friend. I love that you ended with "Create". Lovely poem. Falcon |