 Yamichan16 2007-04-05 . chapter 1intersting. good poem |
 Hidden Sword of Truth 2007-04-02 . chapter 1Beautifully done!
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 nika-tao 2007-04-02 . chapter 1this is sweet too.. love it like the other's. |
 Nemonus 2007-04-02 . chapter 1Okay. This one is so different from the other of yours which I just reviewed. I'd like a period after "wings". It seems kinda pointless that the "savior" is an angel. Angels, Biblically/really, are not quite like the spirits of purity your first poem and most of society envisions them as. They're warriors, armed with flaming swords and the like. That'll do for your guardian I think. |
 Mabisco 2007-04-02 . chapter 1i like this, and i was thinking [i dont know your style] but you could probably gone further with the poem [not a novel, but a longer poem] to get the reader more into what you're trying to get across [the summary was good] |
 flies.like.decay. 2007-04-02 . chapter 1My guardian angel isn't a person. My guardian angel is music. There's always songs that you can relate to, proof that somebody understands, and that's why I LOVE music. And books. Stupid books, my mom calls them. She says I spend all my time in my room reading stupid books and listening to music and not doing school work. Well, excuse me. Since she likes to read herself, I thought she understood the connection. The conversation with people you'll never meet. In person or otherwise. |
 a silenced revolution 2007-04-02 . chapter 1Kind of odd, but you did a good job. |