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| poisonedpassions. 2007-12-03 ch 1,   | Im very interested in this. Well written and intriguing. Keep writing,, Keep your head high! **. |
| Robynbird 2007-11-16 ch 2, | Looking good! This one seems like it has a lot of potential. ...not that your other writing doesn't. ;) |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-02 ch 2, | Nice addition. I wouldn't believe a guy who said he wasn't a rapist just because he said it. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2007-11-02 ch 1, | Terrific beginning. It's very cute. ^^ ~Twilight Starr~ |
| ConfusionClass101 2007-09-06 ch 2, | Oh very very nice. And this isn't typical writing for you? Now I've got to wonder what IS typical of you, because to me, this seems pretty *beep* good! LoL... Update soon and I'll be watching! |
| Autumn-Sky0 2007-07-05 ch 1, | Wow, it explains true emotions perfectly. You should really continue this. |
| Broken Wrist 2007-07-02 ch 1, | Oh! U should so do a second chapter to this, to tell why she/he (is it a girl or boy main character?) didn't want to love. Real good, as always. NS |
| Robynbird 2007-06-27 ch 1, | Very good. I love your writing style. You're very descriptive, but not boringly so. Sweet. |
| zzz 2007-05-18 ch 1, | this is awesome, please please please please please please update. it's very very good |
| Harena 2007-05-12 ch 1, | It is really good please continue |
| Glacier Goddess 2007-04-02 ch 1, | Tough streak,tough love...in the end it's just a streak of love. Great job,no matter how much we try to resist sometimes it is impossible.Hope to see more from you soon.I like this one-shot. DivineSoul |
| CitizenOfZozo 2007-04-02 ch 1, | Touching piece. Your word choice put a lot of emotion into this story. I'm left wondering what brought the characters to this point, but at the same time, it feels quite complete enough on its own. Nicely written. |