Aw..I hope everything worked out!

Kali

I had the TV on while i read this but your poem is so good that I didn't pay attention to Scrubs (the show i was watching) at all. It reminds me of how i feel about one my friends. I must say again i really really REALLY liked your poem. please write more

Hey, well done again.

My only little suggestion is that maybe "enrage" would be better for the rhythm... But maybe just me.

Great work!