sora-chigau
2007-04-04
ch 1,   | wow. I really love your craft! You are a very talented writer, with good word usage and control. This haiku is especially beautiful. It captures that feeling that we all experience when we are at our lowest point-just waiting and seeking death or comfort or something in between. It reminds us that we are just simple pawns in the inscrutable controversy between good and evil in our lives; where we are deemed as righteous and saved or unrighteous and damned in the divine game of life and fate. Such a cheery topic, no? I hope you had a really great snowday...in the middle of April. Can't wait to see you tomorrow! |
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