Wow, this is just amazing, seriously! It's got that dark-dreamyish feeling, you know? Even though every second word isn't from a thesaurus and like twenty syllables long (which is really annoying sometimes), the words are still amazing, more amazing! Love this poem.

I like this. It's faint and beautiful. Very expressive; lovely imagery. Well done. I would've added a little more punctuation, but that's a personal preference. This is however a good poem. Reminiscent somewhat of Leonard Cohen. :)

And thanks for the review.