ouhah...probably one of the best story i have ever read !

i normally don't do review because i dont' speak very well english (and i hope you understand me) but i felle the need to write you a comment : thank you for sharing this great story ! (i appreciate your others stories but this one is stunning in my opinion (don't seem to be a "fictionpress" story !))

Cute. I love the last line of this chapter.

Shaun's a redhead? Wow. We just learn new things about our main characters every chapter, huh?

Great chapter :)

I feel like this is short compared to your previous chapter but I'm just glad you updated.

I feel like Erin's showing signs that she's not as straight and could possibly like Shaun back but I don't think that's the case.

Nice chapter. It made me smile.

Awesome chapter! I'm loving it!

This chapter is not what i expected but still made me so happy. When i saw that you've updated this story in my email, i was so happy!

Yes! Erin accepted! Woo!

I'd be pissed if this was the final chapter although this being the final chapter is the last thing on my mind. I didnt expect an author's note either.. Update soon please? PLEEEEEASE?

Nooo! You left us at a cliffhanger! This chapter is shorter than the last one but still I'm so happy that you updated this story so soon. Yay for fast updates!

I swear almost in every one of your chapters, there's this big word that barely anybody knows and I have to go and look it up on Google. But those big words show that you're just effing smart.

I'm so glad you updated, and I was so happy to see them reunited. Sweet as sugar :)

Loved it and I can't wait for your next chapter.

This story deserves way more reviews.

And they finally are back together! Wooh! In the middle of the chapter (this was before i fully realized the length of the chapter), i thought you were going to end it there before they meet up in person and torture us with a cliffhanger. I was wrong.

I think Shaun is well.. kinda old to be writing like a teenager (hahahaha).

You just made my Tuesday. Thank You! xD (Update soon please?)

When i read that Shaun was having an artist's block, i knew it was because of Erin. And im so happy! You brought Erin and Shaun back together! Please update soon?

When I noticed you updated I had to go over and re-read the whole thing cause I forgot what was happening, then everything started coming back to me :)

Awesome chapter, I'm looking forward to your next update.

This is interesting. Shaun is...I guess for a slut she's pretty ethical. Not jerky. I don't hate her, and it's always a good thing when someone doesn't hate your (main) characters.

very well written! shaun is an interesting character, but i think it's a little...degrading and inaccurate to call her a whore. a whore implies that she is a prostitute who sleeps with men for money. i think "loose" would be a better term for her.

Aww poor Erin...bring Shaun and Erin back together(somehow) please?

this story is so well written. could u write a sequel to this?