Reviews for Fields of Elysium

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Millie Dillmont 2007-06-24 ch 4,	Yeah! You have to go on. It sounded like they were going to meet all around the world! How cool would it be if they met up again...and then again... Keep going. It's so amazing. I didn't even know there was such a thing as body painting until I read this, and the characters are so amazing. You have to keep writing it.
briannathewriter 2007-06-21 ch 8,	Oh, come on! You have to continue this! Please! One more chapter, please? (would have left this on another ch., but I reviewed on that one) Well, if you're just stopping, it's okay. But it seems like you just didn't know where to go with this in the end. If you ever get an idea for it, will you finish it?
Incognito 2007-06-14 ch 9,	I can`t believe how few reviews this story has received...it`s one of the most amazing stories here.
Millie Dillmont 2007-05-25 ch 9,	This story should have millions of reviews because it is written so well and I like how it's not perfect. It's a good reflection of real life...and it's just amazing.
briannathewriter 2007-05-24 ch 9,	Wow! This is amazing! You have to keep writing. You have a wonderful way of conveying exactly how the characters feel, and it really grabs the reader. Please, update soon.
Millie Dillmont 2007-05-21 ch 8,	I really enjoyed reading this interesting story. I like how there is little to know connection between Shaun and Erin, Erin isn't moved by Shaun's finger painting. So it just seems like its going to be more important to both of them. I really like Erin because I feel like her most days. Anyway I came on here to get inspired for my own story and found yours and I hope there's more!
French.my.Fancy 2007-05-21 ch 8,	God, it's so unique! It's pretty much Erin, the story is the art! sorry, I just love it, its like amazing. I'd say almost breathtaking but I hate puns.
And-on-Anonymous 2007-05-05 ch 7,	I'm excited to see what's going to happen next... It was good to have some background info on her, and it was nice to get the stor on her and Uriah. Is that a girls name in America (assuming you're from there- sorry if you're not), or did you just like it? In England, as far as I know, we ony have it as a girls name. I love seeing the differences between language etc. Good job :)
And-on-Anonymous 2007-05-03 ch 6,	And it continues... I'm interested to know more about Uriah and Shaun. I like this story, like I always say, it has a god style and is well written, the only thing i thikn that didn't flow properly was the word 'nookie'. I'm being really picky, it just seemed quite out of cntext with the rest of your writing, but hey, ignore me if you want... Looking frward to the next one :)
Orangeena 2007-04-29 ch 4,	Haha... "Portugal’s whack... That place is hella poor" - I would NEVER in a million years have pictured Shaun saying something like that. I guess we learn more about them each day. Although I was surprised that Erin had a job there.. It's not exactly one of the fashion capitals of the world. I love Shaun's inclination toward Erin. It's not at all rushed, which I appreciate. I'd still love to hear more from Erin- her take on the relationship thus far. Cheers!
PrettyAwkward 2007-04-23 ch 4,	Something held Shaun back. I guess Erin is really getting to her, slowly but surely. Good chapter. Update soon.
And-on-Anonymous 2007-04-23 ch 4,	I really like the way you write, it's very different to a lot of the authors on here- I think it's because they are writing specifically for internet resders, but this is better- it feels like I'm reasding a real book. I'm very impressed. Love the ideas that you come up with for the paintings on her body- great idea! Well done, looking forward to the next chapter :) P.S arems may not be- but wrists are!!
PrettyAwkward 2007-04-22 ch 3,	I like how its not about love, its just about two very different people. Its good so far. Can't wait to see what happens when they both see eachother again. Update soon.
Orangeena 2007-04-22 ch 3,	I liked this chapter. Shaun's reaction to Erin's face wasn't romanticized at all- it fit her character pretty perfectly, actually. I also liked how their encounter was set apart from those of Shaun's previous clients.. there was no flirting or what have you. Instead there was the beginning of a deeper connection, one that seemed to affect Erin more in the moment, but obviously took hold of Shaun as well. On another note, if you have any questions about painting or the like I'd be more than happy to help you out. I'm not claiming to be an expert by any means, but I have quite a bit of experience with several different forms of media. Cheers to this addition, keep it up ;)
And-on-Anonymous 2007-04-17 ch 3,	You've got good insight into the human mind. I'm impressed.

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