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| Iris Jones 2008-03-24 ch 1,  | abusethis was amazing im a big fan of your work im going to go through your list of art and read most of them if not all (if time will permit it) so awesome job my friend you have gained yet another loyal fan |
| Dark Emo Shadow 2008-03-07 ch 1, | abusehm so what happened to jake-does he now hate Parker? |
| seraphim-rush 2007-06-01 ch 1, | abuseBEAUTIFUL! ♥ |
| magalina 2007-05-22 ch 1, | abusethis one felt different o.O But I loved it all the same. Too bad about Jake :/ :D |
| Amindaya 2007-05-12 ch 1, | abuseAnother great story. I think I'm just going to forget about putting them on my favorite stories list and put you on my favorite authors list. I can't believe your lack of reviews. They're great! The writing, the words usage...everything's perfect. |
| Squirrel Activist 2007-05-09 ch 1, | abuseWow. Uh. Wow. Someone I really liked used to call me SpiderMan. Anyways. That has nothing to do with the review. Anyways. Wow, this was good. Really good. You are a very good author, you just are. |
| Cracked Butterfruit 2007-05-04 ch 1, | abuseYour writing is captivating and realistic. I really enjoyed it :) It'll be awesome if you could do a sequel (hinthint) haha... |
| Kailum 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abuseThe Spider-Man thing was cute :P I like your beginning and ending, they really connected well ^_^ |
| Cel M. 2007-04-04 ch 1, | abuseThat was sweet and realistic. I liked it a lot. =] |
| Tropic Fruit 2007-04-03 ch 1, | abuseGorgeous piece. I love the angst, the self-doubt, and the honest emotion. It really flows well, and your style serves the realistic nature of your characters. Great ending, too. Leaves off pensive, with all the right answers filled in. Maybe you'll do a follow-up? I really hope so. Keep up the good work! |
| Kaysin 2007-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI loved this. Not only was it sweet, with James being a cutiee and all, but it was realistic too. Parker's self-loathing after realising he's gay is accurate, as is Jake's reaction. Jake being a dick made me kind of sad, though it does make sense. With Jake's reactions through the oneshot I was wondering whether he was also gay and in love with Parker/James (more like Parker) but I guess that bit at the end shattered that. I know people don't usually do sequels for oneshots, and normally it bugs me when people ask, but are you going to do a scene where James comes back? |
| Sinister Slash 2007-04-02 ch 1, | abuseI love this story! =) You did a great job writing it...is there going to be like a sequel or something to this? I totally think there should be, cause you did such a good job with this story...i want more. |