Even though your story ends where it does, I'm sure everything will work out between them. And Jake will wise up at some point.

Your characters feel so real. Good job.

Good. Very interesting. I liked how the events unfolded and how you could tell that story in a relativelly short story (if it was me it would take much longer. I always admire those who can do good one-shots).

James (not a half-Vietnamese, but 100% Brazilian =D)

Wow...awesome. Truly, awesome :) Especially..It's good when the homophobic society is reflected. God, James! :D

w00t! Okay, this story was great and all. Written well, not brilliantly but still, well and I liked the fact that Parker lost Jake over the issue, and I actually liked his Christian hang-ups which you managed to portray in a way that wasn't irritating or melodramatic. However I think my favourite thing is James' pwnsome eurasianess...I get so excited when us half-castes get our share of representation. ^-^

aw. that was nice. i was wondering if maybe jake was gay, but no. so. that's good. i mean, if he's gay in your mind, that's great, i'm just saying like, you didn't actually say "JAKE'S GAY."

so that's nice, because i hate how everybody's gay in slash stories. it's like, not realistic at all. so.

cute. i liked it.

this was amazing
im a big fan of your work
im going to go through your list of art
and read most of them if not all
(if time will permit it)
so
awesome job my friend
you have gained yet another loyal fan

hm so what happened to jake-does he now hate Parker?

BEAUTIFUL! ♥

this one felt different o.O But I loved it all the same. Too bad about Jake :/

:D

Another great story. I think I'm just going to forget about putting them on my favorite stories list and put you on my favorite authors list. I can't believe your lack of reviews. They're great! The writing, the words usage...everything's perfect.

Wow.
Uh.
Wow.
Someone I really liked used to call me SpiderMan.

Anyways.
That has nothing to do with the review.

Anyways.
Wow, this was good.
Really good.
You are a very good author, you just are.

Your writing is captivating and realistic. I really enjoyed it :)
It'll be awesome if you could do a sequel (hinthint) haha...

The Spider-Man thing was cute :P I like your beginning and ending, they really connected well ^_^

That was sweet and realistic. I liked it a lot. =]

Gorgeous piece. I love the angst, the self-doubt, and the honest emotion. It really flows well, and your style serves the realistic nature of your characters.

Great ending, too. Leaves off pensive, with all the right answers filled in. Maybe you'll do a follow-up?

I really hope so. Keep up the good work!