Nemonus
2007-04-04
ch 1,  | abuseSonets! Whopee! (I certainly hope you don't mind my reviewing on this site though it's backup for somewhere else. I havn't heard of the somewhere else, though I may look at it.) Good poem--both easy to understand and written in the archaic style. Like a cypher, that's what Shakespearean English is now. Cool. :) I like "Her seemingly merry (mis)demeanor", because that's what's so bad about some people, I think-merry misdemeanors-- So you have made me connect your work to life; congrats. Unforunately I have not the skill (or the metronome?) to comment on your rhythm sceme. The last line did not quite mesh with the subject of the rest. |
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