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| The Hawks Reject 2007-04-03 ch 1,  | abuseVery good, shows smaller emotions Try to pick words that make a transition from word to word faster EX. Instead of Do They EVEN Care try Do They ever Care? Difference is if you were to sing it, it would be shorter with ever than even, try it out |