Three syllables for you:

Ah-ma-zing.

I loved it, it's relatable yet totally fantasy-ish at the same time. It was great!

Good job!

It could use a few...TWEAKS but other than that, WOW. o_o

I liked the last five lines a lot. Great job.

One word Awsome - *lol I think you can tell by now I cant do reviews very good XD*

I know how this feels and it sucks. Great job at expressing that though. Keep up the good work.

And all I want to do is scream...I can really agree with you on that one! I wrote something a lot like this a couple weeks ago, especially the take me to another, happier place. Awesome job (as always)!

I like this. I think the middle part could use a little tweaking, but the first and last few lines were flawless. The ending really brought the whole piece together and you did a nice job with this! Keep writing!

I love the emotion in it. The ending is perfectly angsty. Wonderful job.

And thanks for all the reviews of course.

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