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| Scribe Of All Trades 2008-02-07 ch 1,  | abuseLove the raw drama & honesty in this... |
| HipSafeDeadGrunge 2007-04-12 ch 1, | abuseThis isn't related to your poem in the slightest, but I'd like to start off by addressing the fact that "God doesn't forgive bad grammar." is SO ** amazing. I don't know why... Maybe it's because I have bad grammar and I'm trying to avoid dealing with God, ha ha. The poem was good. Can't say that I know the feeling, but whatever. I especially liked the last two lines, ha ha. They made the poem worth reading. |
| Secondhand Suicide 2007-04-06 ch 1, | abuseI know how you feel. Brief, but eloquently put. It fits the feeling that is portrayed, and I think that any other lines or words would muddle it up and misconstrue it. Leave it just as it is! It's wonderful! |