It frustrates me that I cannot find any connection to this particular poem. Usually with your work, it makes sense to anybody and everybody. Here it seems so foreign to me...
Sorry! :(

An unusually clear-cut poem from you. Not tied up in the abstract language I've come to expect from you.

A well written poem which leaves me asking a question... "Who Died?"

spooky. nicely writen though! Really realistic. ^^ Check out my stories too!