Yes. You have summed up my nightly writing experience, lol. I quite liked it, the imagery... I have problems myself in that area. Must read more...

I love how even though there isn't any obvious rhyming going on, there's a sort of rhythm that develops. I like the bits at the beginning about ink and scratches, and I love the wonderful images you conjure up with the crawling inside the willow and the painted kiss.

very beautiful work!

Sarika, I love it! I've done that way too many times (except my special pen has blue ink.)
Cute name too. ^_~