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| Vieho 2008-03-17 ch 1,  | Great story. It was very lyrical. |
| Pas d'Un 2007-09-15 ch 1, | Ohmigod, so good and sad and happy at the end. Even tough it wasn't romantic, you can tell there is something between them that goes far beyond the superficial. Amazing, lady! |
| Heroine of Antiquity 2007-04-06 ch 1,  | This is a lot different than Over the Fantasy, which I just read! But I love it just the same! I'm off to read more of your stuff... |
| Say Ocean 2007-04-05 ch 1, | Wow. Just wow. I love this. It's so powerful. I need to go and read some of your other stuff. Now. This is so good! And sad! But happy, too! There is hope, amongst the... spiderwebs. |
| Consistently Inconsistent 2007-04-04 ch 1, | Anotrher lovely oneshot! Well, lovely perhaps isn't the best word, but how about intriguing and very well-written? I love your stuff. And I love that you broke away from your usual humor genre with this! It is excellent -- the two characters are complex, I think, and the inner monologue from the boy and his observations make the story come to life. |
| Keep_It_A_Secret_To_The_Gra... 2007-04-03 ch 1, | I like it how Sloan's words almost sound like poetry. Very nice. I hope you've never had your own corner. =) |
| ashes ashes we all fall dow... 2007-04-02 ch 1, | Another excellent story -- I hadn't seen anything new from you for awhile! While this isn't the update of Vandalism that I want so much, this is just amazing. I feel like I really know your two characters, even though you can only infer little about their pasts. Your imagery is raw and I almost feel emotionally drained, but in a good way! Keep up the great writing, and PLEASE update Vandalism soon! |