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| selgodemlojbrujmusiclyf 2008-11-29 ch 8,   | hahaha...how hilarious!! i like the voices in her mind!! anyway, next chap!! please, for me?? |
| Twilight Starr 2008-07-11 ch 8, | Great addition. The narration is still hilarious. The dialogue is pretty amusing. Nice work. Keep writing! ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-07-11 ch 7, | "posses" should be "possess". ["As you wish"] should be ["As you wish."]. The Satan's mistress comment was amusing. This chapter was very funny. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-07-11 ch 6, | Uh-oh. Matt's move sounds like trouble. The narration is still great. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-07-11 ch 5, | The fact that she screamed was hilarious. It's amusing how he uses 'milady' a lot. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-07-11 ch 4, | It looks like her last line might get her in trouble. ;) Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-07-11 ch 3, | She likes mentioning Sherlock. ;) I wonder what happened five years ago to change her. Great way of having Matt mention that to make people interested. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-07-11 ch 2, | "Her names Bugs" should be "Her name['s] Bugs". I like the use of the name Circe. I wonder if you got it from the mythological enchantress. I actually own all the books in the SWEEP series by Cate Tiernan. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| Twilight Starr 2008-07-11 ch 1, | I liked the narration. It was pretty amusing. Nice work. ~Twilight Starr~ |
| MelodramaticFool 2008-06-01 ch 8, | Yay! lol me likey your story! The humor, sarcasm, the slips of cussing or being rude to parentals (i think we've all done that o-o) and just the whole supernatural twist to the top! I love it all! Waiting for your next chapter! ;o |
| katieo9239 2008-05-31 ch 8, | please please update again soon. |
| Shadowed and Shattered 2008-05-31 ch 8, | As I said, very nice. Funny as well. About the charge thing... is that similar to the show... uh... what's it called... Charmed! That's it! Is is similar to that kinda thing? One last point to make: McDonald's is icky. |
| Diespedes 2008-05-02 ch 7, | um...interesting...lol but I like :) |
| Shadowed and Shattered 2008-05-01 ch 7, | Nice job. I like this chapter. And we're finally getting more info on the delightful Alexis. Yay! :) |
| iloveme5895 2008-04-30 ch 7, | i love black cat lol that song rocks, anyway i love it so far and cant wait 4more *~ashley~* |