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| D.Doberman 2008-02-15 ch 1,   | Funny! Couldn't stop laughing at the hilarious lines. Can't wait to see that on stage! |
| Malise Ling 2007-07-17 ch 1, | You have some interesting friends there Robert. I'm going to say...wow. I actually really liked it better because it was so random. Enthusiasm (and my ability to spell aparently) escapes me. Darn Office. Sucks the life out a person, I tell ya! |
| Ms. Critic 2007-06-06 ch 4, | This one is definitely my favorite. I've actually read it before somewhere on someone's computer, or something. This one would be really funny to perform. Is this critique well-rounded? THAT'S A TYPO DOWN THERE! It should be WELL-ROUNDED, not WELL ROUNDED! Okay then. BUh-BYeieY! |
| Guess who.................. 2007-06-06 ch 3, | This wasn't as good as the first two, but still funny! I wish L.T. Dodge was my dad! And that I had a golden retriever... |
| Ms. Critic 2007-06-06 ch 2, | Oh that was funny! That is really all I have to say. Well, and the fact that I don't think any one would want to star in these if you made them into movies. |
| Ms. Critic 2007-06-06 ch 1, | Um...wonderful? Very..uh...fast moving. Why did you have to kill off Mr. Doodles? He was my favorite! And what exactly was the speech? Um, yeah. You're quite a play-writer! |
| guess who's back babies 2007-04-03 ch 1, | This was pretty good for script writing. I think you tried to use asteriks you can use "-" in place of "*" because asteriks [*] disappear on here. CLC |
| Double A 2007-04-02 ch 4, | Man this had better be the first review. I have just a few words to say about this Freaken Flippin Fruppin funny LOL!! man I forgot that Chase was like that you should call and tell him about this you might get more storys, or not. Oh well... still very funny. Keep writing! Double A |