Funny! Couldn't stop laughing at the hilarious lines. Can't wait to see that on stage!

You have some interesting friends there Robert.

I'm going to say...wow. I actually really liked it better because it was so random. Enthusiasm (and my ability to spell aparently) escapes me. Darn Office. Sucks the life out a person, I tell ya!

This one is definitely my favorite. I've actually read it before somewhere on someone's computer, or something. This one would be really funny to perform. Is this critique well-rounded? THAT'S A TYPO DOWN THERE! It should be WELL-ROUNDED, not WELL ROUNDED! Okay then. BUh-BYeieY!

This wasn't as good as the first two, but still funny! I wish L.T. Dodge was my dad! And that I had a golden retriever...

Oh that was funny! That is really all I have to say. Well, and the fact that I don't think any one would want to star in these if you made them into movies.

Um...wonderful?
Very..uh...fast moving. Why did you have to kill off Mr. Doodles? He was my favorite! And what exactly was the speech?
Um, yeah. You're quite a play-writer!

This was pretty good for script writing.

I think you tried to use asteriks you can use "-" in place of "*" because asteriks [*] disappear on here.

CLC

Man this had better be the first review.

I have just a few words to say about this
Freaken Flippin Fruppin funny LOL!! man I forgot that Chase was like that you should call and tell him about this you might get more storys, or not. Oh well... still very funny.

Keep writing! Double A