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| Desert Illusion 2007-04-03 ch 1,   | Very nice poem. I like how you ask all the 'When' questions. It really does make you wonder as to 'when' one realizes that their feelings have started to change, and things are no longer the same. I like the writing. The transition to the next thought and when questions is pretty smooth. It's not abrupt and it doesn't seem as if your thoughts are all jumbled up and you're asking all these questions all of a sudden. Very nice piece of work!! Keep it up! Love you always, ~Your Baji :) |
| momijigirl 2007-04-03 ch 1, | Wow...that was really powerful Things do tend to get complex when friendship becomes love. I hope things are working out between you too. I haven't talked with you in a while, hope I can soon. |
| proton7 2007-04-03 ch 1, | hey, nice work you have there =) |