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VirginiaVortex 2007-10-14 . chapter 3
Update?

Please?

It's really good.
VirginiaVortex 2007-09-25 . chapter 4
Update?
Please?
It's really good!
black ennui 2007-05-01 . chapter 4
the chapter was ok. :)
though i just wanted to point out, cause i got confused, really, in this part:

“Look, Dev, I think you’d better go. Teach thinks I’m insane. And I actually like this one.”

wasn't devin talking to lucifer? it's just weird that it's "look, -dev-,..." but if i'm wrong just tell me.

good luck with finding the right direction for the story to go! :)
Broken Captain 2007-05-01 . chapter 4
Aw my darling, you are so cute. i love this story. you know that. i was practically drooling on your shoulder while you wrote. and i can't believe you kept the flogging line. HAHA. love you. yeah you know who this is, Admiral.
Princess Daenerys 2007-04-10 . chapter 1
This doesn’t offend me in any way, because I’m an atheist, but I feel I must speak my mind. I’m not sure you understand the fact that the character of Satan is the absence of light, and he’s the figure which lies behind sin. The character (Satan) cannot be Satan, unless he’s the devil. Sorry this is so unclear. What I’m saying is, is that if Lucifer was friends with God, then there really would be no ‘devil’ or Lucifer, because sin is what makes him. So for me, it makes this story highly unbelievable.
Rita Margarita 2007-04-09 . chapter 3
The more I read, the more I like! More! More!
Loretta Grazie 2007-04-06 . chapter 2
ok, you got me hooked up in your story... please, please update soon... ^_^ hmm... what kind of relationship does lucifer and devin have exactly?
Rita Margarita 2007-04-04 . chapter 2
Check it out! I'm leaving a review! I like this story. :) P.S. This is Christina.
The Ferrett 2007-04-04 . chapter 2
I do not get the implications of the realationship between the devil and devin.
The Ferrett 2007-04-03 . chapter 1
I came in for a squiz and this is fun. The subtle jokes, the craziness of God and Satan it's all so good.
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