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Altum 2007-11-17 ch 1,	Someone was killed after... a supposed victory? Seems pretty simple, but I might be missing something. I wonder if you meant for it to be a duel or if you meant for someone to catch up with him after he found something. Is the wound metaphorical? Lots of nuances to uncover >.>
Yuval 2007-05-12 ch 1,	Invictus: Undefeated. I think that this person has fallen for a greater cause, but the cause won't be realised in time to save them... however, in a way, they've succeeded? Or maybe they were just crushed by a falling supermarket shelf. Either way, it's an oddly beautiful haiku, and it obviously has a meaning, so I like it. It's a neat trick, telling a story in so few words; it requires an eloquence I don't have, but YOU do, so kudos to you.
All Alone With Her Thoughts 2007-04-22 ch 1,	I love this. adds to favourites Thanks so much for the review! Rowan.
Patrick McGill 2007-04-19 ch 1,	I take it this man (or woman) has been in some sort of battle or fight, and though winning, had found themselves mortally wounded? I'm not reading very far into it, hahaha, but I do like the picture. Well, I mean I like that I get the picture, not that I enjoy seeing someone bleed to death. (Honest.)
mizu no kokoro 2007-04-18 ch 1,	the title is a word in which my lack of vocabulary stops me from truly feeling the impact, since well the title plays and important role afterall. But i have to say, the image itself... i can imagine it vividly. well written haiku keep writing =]
Simultaneous Tick-Tocks 2007-04-15 ch 1,	Wow, good imagery, I think. Nice poem. :) ~tick-tock
Basara 2007-04-07 ch 1,	sacrifice for one's beliefs... nice...
a silenced revolution 2007-04-03 ch 1,	I love the tragedy of it. And the last line. Great haiku. Keep writing.
TheWarriorsWolf 2007-04-03 ch 1,	I Love It! You are a good poet

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