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| Shookie Smiles Sweetly 2007-04-11 ch 1,  | abuseyou should make a song for this one! it rocks!! good job man, --ShookieInLove (formerly known as Shookie Smiles Sweetly) |
| Tytherpol 2007-04-03 ch 1, | abuseI like this, but I think you could completely drop the first stanza and it wouldn't hurt anything. sounds kinda like a country song. The rhyming is kinda off-ish, too. I don't know. Maybe it's just that I, personally, don't usually like rhyming most of the time. |