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| Kura-sama 2008-06-25 ch 12,  | abuseOMG thats such an evil thing to leave behind ... the teaser was evil. So she's pregnant ... and now the wait begins to find out where the story is going to go. Who does she love? No one? Only herself ..? I guess she's just too into protecting herself then, she wants to be with whoever protects and make her feel safe, but she can't seem to actually love anyoen ... I wonder if she will fall in love eventually. I vote Death~ I just love the bad one ... The good one is not truly innocent, and the bad one is not truly evil. Will be waiting for updates~ |
| SamanthaNicole 2007-08-21 ch 1, | abuseHmm, this is a really enthralling beginning. I love the idea of death being an actual person (of sorts). I love the premise - wonderful job. I'll definitely be back for more. Cheers! Sammy |
| vIE-TeNDRe 2007-08-19 ch 12, | abuse0_o zach or death?? omg! well lets see then, it would be better if it was zach for so many different reasons but death...hmm would it change him if she had his kid and maybe decided to be more responsible?? :O maybe, maybe not. never know until you update! so update as soon as possible! |
| teardrop456 2007-08-14 ch 12, | abuseAH WHAT?! SHE"S PREGNANT?! AH |
| atreyu love 2007-08-13 ch 12, | abuseOH SHIT. OMG. SHES PREGNANT? Who is she talking to right there?? OMG. i have to read whats going to happen! please hurry and update!! :) okay? lol im waiting! |
| Lindzi 2007-08-10 ch 11, | abuseThat's the end? No way! There has to be an epilodge thing, or something! You can't just leave us hanging? Man, I'm so confused! What happened? |
| atreyu love 2007-08-10 ch 11, | abusethat wasnt the end was it? if not, PLEASE UPDATE! im in love with this story :) |
| atreyu love 2007-08-09 ch 1, | abusesounds interesting :D |
| cheesecake.thief 2007-08-09 ch 11, | abuseYou are a pure genuis, the pure emotion, the construction of the chapters... Ack. I love it. |
| Ray 2007-08-08 ch 11, anon. | abuseDamn your good!! |
| Carmel March 2007-08-08 ch 11, | abuseLovely. I'm really liking the direction this story is going in. Unexpected and really quite intriguing. And the characters seem to be developing even more. Their feelings and emotions are changing and emerging, making them more realistic, believable characters. Very nicely done. Update as soon as you are able to :) ~Carm~ |
| teardrop456 2007-08-08 ch 11, | abusefor i second i thought u were serious that it was the last chapter and i almost yelled at you/my computer lol |
| Elizabeth Newman 2007-08-08 ch 10, | abuseGreat chapter. Love it. =] |
| Lindzi 2007-08-03 ch 10, | abuseOf course, this chapter rocked, filler or not. Ok, I was driving to my local icecream place yesterday and a song called 'Killing Me Softly' came on. It was an older song, with a woman singing it, but I thought it went really, really well with this story. I don't know, it sounds kinda stupid I know, but I thought you might wanna know. Well, can't wait for chapter 11!! |
| ShadowOfRain 2007-08-03 ch 10, | abuseThis is pretty good! I haven't gotten around to writing anything on here yet since I've been kinda busy. Anywho, great story! Keep up the good work! |