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| Rachael The Philosophical 2008-05-26 ch 1, | Title unknown Wait, did you get this idea from Harry Potter? Lol! How about Visions And Nightmares For a title? It’s decent, disspise the big suspicion I have about it. I have a few spelling corrections. It’s calm down It’s think you |
| Draketeeth 2007-07-17 ch 1, | "Slithering across the tile littered floor,, she. . ." You only need one coma, not two. A tense opening to a story that has some potential. I would only warn that Amanda has the potential to turn into a god-moder, so you'd need to watch out while writing to limit her powers and give her some flaws. Other than that, it would be interesting to see where this goes. |
| The Reverse Edge Blade 2007-05-05 ch 1, | This is the first time I've read anything from the supernatural genre, but this was cool! I liked Amanda's visions, and how you described them! Looking forward to the update! ^^ The Reverse Edge Blade |
| All Alone With Her Thoughts 2007-04-05 ch 1, | O. Strange. I want to read more! Sorry it took me so long to review, I've been SO busy! Anyhow, great job. Post more. Rowan. |