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Rachael The Philosophical
2008-05-26
ch 1,
Title unknown
Wait, did you get this idea from Harry Potter? Lol!
How about
Visions And Nightmares
For a title?
It’s decent, disspise the big suspicion I have about it.
I have a few spelling corrections.
It’s calm down
It’s think you
Draketeeth
2007-07-17
ch 1,
"Slithering across the tile littered floor,, she. . ." You only need one coma, not two.

A tense opening to a story that has some potential. I would only warn that Amanda has the potential to turn into a god-moder, so you'd need to watch out while writing to limit her powers and give her some flaws. Other than that, it would be interesting to see where this goes.
The Reverse Edge Blade
2007-05-05
ch 1,
This is the first time I've read anything from the supernatural genre, but this was cool! I liked Amanda's visions, and how you described them! Looking forward to the update! ^^
The Reverse Edge Blade
All Alone With Her Thoughts
2007-04-05
ch 1,
O. Strange. I want to read more!

Sorry it took me so long to review, I've been SO busy!

Anyhow, great job. Post more.

Rowan.
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