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| Remedy For Love 2007-05-22 ch 1,   | Great Job with this poem. I liked the feeling of dejection but then at the end slight hope. Once again, nice work. (: Rin |
| xsariex 2007-04-03 ch 1, | good job :) but I think instead of putting every new line starting with a capital, only do it at the begining of sentences, and maybe use more commas and punctuation, I dont know, but I liked this, it was good, keep writing :) |