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| DOMOxKUN 2008-04-07 ch 15,  | abuseOkay, let me say, I totally cried while reading this.:'] It was seriously one of the best slash I've read /ever/. Though, I've only read like... 3 and one of them was about a girl turning into a guy and then back so that was mostly het xD |
| firestar267 2007-12-14 ch 15, | abuseJust wow. So so SO well written. You captured the characters perfectly. As patronising as it sounds to say, well done. I really mean it, i loved this :) Hope you do do an epilogue :) |
| Silver Rain Fell 2007-08-07 ch 15, | abuseAw. That was really cute. They got things figured out in the end! And lol at the closing line. Bless. |
| tia-blue 2007-08-05 ch 15, | abuseWE! this story just made my life. But seriously, do we get to hear more on Casey? |
| I'll Be Your Fairytale 2007-08-03 ch 15, | abuseAw, that was so sweet and perfect and sweet and, just, aww. But Zach so ruined the moment, lol, "Tony...I really gotta pee...". Classic. Anyways, congrats on a great story and I eagerly await the epilogue! Luv, I-B-Y-F, x |
| Rock on an Ocean Shore 2007-08-02 ch 15, | abuseLol. Best ending line ever. There are a couple of loose ends that I'm sure you'll cover in the epilogue, like Damien and his parents, etc. And maybe show how the high school public reacts to them actually being together, and especially how Casey reacts. |
| the Berserker 2007-08-01 ch 15, | abuse:o That was so... not what I expected. At all. Granted, I was expecting a happy ending, but it was so... fast. Like Zach SUDDENLY came to terms with his crush and acted on it. This whole time Zach was in denial, and... well, it just didn't gel with me. I really hope you write that epilogue. I'm sorry... |
| Queen Of The Beautifuls 2007-08-01 ch 15, | abuseaw, how sweet...i think...lol. i loved it, sad its over, happy they're together, and eager for another...keep up the great work! luffz |
| Rose In Room 101 2007-08-01 ch 15, | abuseAw, cute ^_^ |
| Esquirella 2007-08-01 ch 15, | abuseLOL! It was so seriously cute! And then Zach's bladder had to go and ruin everything! |
| Abstruse Blue 2007-08-01 ch 15, | abuseAdd an epilogue! haha, I want one. I LOVE them two...need more. And yay for FINALLY hooking up! C: |
| Jamestastic 2007-08-01 ch 15, | abuseADD THE EPILOGUE i cant believe its over :( great story though, you know i love you for writing it. (: |
| sweets555 2007-07-19 ch 14, | abusea little confusing of a chapter, (tho i was in a hurry, it prolly is just me) but great none the less. love it! |
| the Berserker 2007-07-17 ch 14, | abuse:( |
| Silver Rain Fell 2007-07-11 ch 14, | abuseSo... the thlot pickens. All this homophobia sounds ominous. And CLIFFHANGER, MUCH? Really looking forward to an update. One small thing, though - I'm getting dizzy from all these POV changes, though it does give quite a funky movie-type vibe, seeing all the things everyone's doing at each given time. |