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| bittersweet.season 2007-07-30 ch 1,   | gorgeous again, and of course, i was caught by our title. =] |
| StillWRD 2007-05-18 ch 1, | Hello. I'm being lazy and not logging in. Hope you'll excuse me. Anyway, I must read some more of your 'stuff' sometime. This is the first I've read, and I do like it. The 'big words' are lots of fun. What I like the most about it is the rhyme scheme. it's very clean, but not forced (although I'm not sure about the 'dear/fear' bit, the 'dear' seems like an add-on "Oops! better make this rhyme!" But it doesn't jar mea at all, either). The rhymes are also flexible. You rhyme 2 lines for most of it, then you have that 3 line rhyme in the midst, but that doesn't break the flow at all, like it normally would. Anyway, well done. |
| SHadow Wisher 2007-04-29 ch 1, | Advance words indeed... I don't know what they all mean, but i can get an idea from your poem. Nice Job. Shadow Wisher |
| Matthew James Current 2007-04-05 ch 1, | Very advanced language, but you use it well. The poem's message remains clear. Lord knows it's not easy to use large words and still maintain a clear message in your poem. Well done! Ah! Thank you my friend for your support. Your kind words water the flowers in my heart, nourishing my art and my happiness. Thank you always. God Bless you always, and thank you for stopping by my corner of the universe today. |
| ChildeOfChaos 2007-04-04 ch 1, | Wow, such wonderful wording here. I'd quote my favorite lines but I'd just end up quoting your entire poem. I must say I really love your first and last lines the most. Amaazing write. Thank you for sharing your awe inspiring words. |
| mindOFdeliriousUNREST 2007-04-03 ch 1, | this is really beautiful. it's succinct, touching and beautiful all at once. i need some deffinitions though. first, maledict. second, cognition. i think knowing what those meant might help me enjoy the poem more. paz, -the delirious one |
| a silenced revolution 2007-04-03 ch 1, | Beautiful. Great job. |
| Lithium12 2007-04-03 ch 1, | *whistles* brilliant. I love it! Adding this to faves |