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| Mabisco 2007-04-03 ch 1,   | i like the idea of your poem to describe a certain kind of person There is no one kinder Than one who bears rejection And stops himself from teasing. ^^this confused me a little, because the teasing doesn't seem to completely fit. maybe reacting would have been better? and i dont understand this one... There is no one fresher Than one who lives in winter And stops his streams from freezing. |