i didn't lyk it, sorry but yeh..
ur other story dat im reading now is really good tho 'change of mind'
tho i suppose this was done out of boredom n way better than wat i culdve done.
well done
n update dat story soon please!
btw im the one who constantly chnges her name depending on wat im thinkin of/listenin to so yeh 'change of mind' i suppose
hope i didint breach copyright with the reply name...

I think you've got something there.
Like maybe this could be the beginning of a great and epic tale of sadness and strength as he delvs into the new girl's background to figure out what she was really like.
OMG I liked it.
PLZ REVIEW MY STORY!! (**obvious plea**)