I think that it did come froma good place, and I hope that you never stop writing your opinion in poems. I love your work and this is a good example of why.

Keep it up.

Thanks for always reviewing.

Inspiring poem, but please check your grammar! Some of your mistakes could have been prevented by using spellcheck, reading over your work after you've finished, and not posting the poem immediately after you've written it. I usually write a poem and let it sit for a day or two, then return to it to proofread, improve, and finally post. That usually leaves the grammar sparkling clean. ;)

Cristina

Pretty Good,

Needs a little grammar check tjough

Holy sh*t, this sounds so much like me. I'm not even kidding. I loved your rhyming, this would make a really great song and I would definitely listen to it if it was. Really awesome job, I loved it!